The opening headline is a statement, not an invitation
Fixed in the rebuild The new homepage says what the site is, and every photograph says prints are available. See the before and after
The homepage headline is “The unremarkable, reconsidered.” The line below describes the photography, and the only instruction is “Click on any photograph to begin.” Nothing on the first screen says prints are for sale or mentions the artist’s credits.
The first screen is where a new visitor decides whether to stay. The headline is a fine artistic statement, but a collector who arrives without knowing the artist gets no signal that buying is possible, and the only instruction is to browse.
Keep the headline, it’s distinctive. Add one short line under it that bridges to the offer, for example “Signed fine art prints, made in a single exposure,” and a second link that goes to how to buy. The aim isn’t to turn the homepage into a shop. Test it by asking someone new to the site, after 30 seconds, whether prints are for sale.
- Keep the headline.
- Add one short line under it that says signed prints are available.
- Add a second link beside “Click on any photograph to begin” that goes to how to buy.
Page: homepage. Current state: H1 “The unremarkable, reconsidered.”; only instruction “Click on any photograph to begin”; no mention of prints. Desired state: keep the H1; add one line beneath it stating that signed prints are available (owner to supply final wording); add a second link beside the existing instruction pointing to the buying page. Acceptance: a first-time visitor can tell within 8 seconds that prints are for sale.

